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Too many tears have I cried
And only in your name.
Too many times have I tried
And only in my vain.
Too many times have I died
And only in the blame.

{Chorus}
You only made me cry
You only made me try
You only made me die
One too many times

Once again you hurt me
For your own sick taunting.
Once again you left me
For you own sick revenge.
Once again you killed me
For your own sick pleasure.

{Chorus}

You shattere my few dreams
Just to play childish games.
You blocked my few exits
Just to play mindless games.
You took my few chances
Just to play heartless games.

{Chorus x2}
©2005-2009 ~poetrylovr
:iconpoetrylovr:

Author's Comments

I have selected this category due to the fact that this was written when i was intending to learn guitar a/o piano - neither happened. So this piece is lyrics desperately seeking music... oh well~

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:iconriddleb0x:
awsome I really love it :) :clap:

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:halfliquid: riddlebox :halfliquid:
:icondestined2fail:
Really good job, I like it.

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And the question that plagues my mind... is grace enough?
:iconfishgonesad:
oh my.. i'm speechless..

this is exactly the poem i'd be dying to read..

i feel the same way.. exactly the same way.

i love it. :D

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from the saddest girl to ever hold -not a martini- but you.
:iconpoetrylovr:
thanx muchly

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The truth is that our civilization is not Christian; it is a tragic compound of great ideal and fearful practice, of high assurance and desperate anxiety, of loving charity and fearful clutching of possesions.
:iconpoetrylovr:
thanx that means a lot coming from such an amazing writer such as urself~

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The truth is that our civilization is not Christian; it is a tragic compound of great ideal and fearful practice, of high assurance and desperate anxiety, of loving charity and fearful clutching of possesions.
:iconpoetrylovr:
thanx

im glad i could write the poem for you~
hopefully you'll be able to pull yourself back up soon tho cuz i know it took me way too long to pull myself up from this~

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The truth is that our civilization is not Christian; it is a tragic compound of great ideal and fearful practice, of high assurance and desperate anxiety, of loving charity and fearful clutching of possesions.
:icondestined2fail:
Nonsense, I am no better than you.

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And the question that plagues my mind... is grace enough?
:iconpoetrylovr:
dont kid urself - i am but a silly dreamer - ok now it sounds cheezy so ill just shut up and agree if for no other reason than i'm lazy~

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The truth is that our civilization is not Christian; it is a tragic compound of great ideal and fearful practice, of high assurance and desperate anxiety, of loving charity and fearful clutching of possesions.
:iconfishgonesad:
yes.. i agree..


it's been over a year now..

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from the saddest girl to ever hold -not a martini- but you.

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